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MBA专栏频道您所在的位置:>>____-2008年、2009年在职英语作文历年真题及参考范文(一)____-2008年、2009年在职英语作文历年真题及参考范文(一) ______
2008年、2009年在职研究生作文
PartЩWriting(__minutes,__points)
Directions:Inthispart,youareallowed__minutestowriteacompositionofnolessthan___wordsonTheproblemsIhaveinmyEnglishstudy.YourcompositionshouldbebasedonthefollowingoutlinegiveninChinese.
Outline:①遇到哪些困难
②产生原因
③如何克服
TheproblemsIhaveinmyEnglishstudy
DuringmystudyofEnglish,Imeetwithsomeproblems.(主旨句)Theseproblemsareasfollows.(过渡句)
Firstofall,whenIreadorlistenEnglish,Ialwaysencounterwordsandexpressions.(解释句一)Sovocabularyisatroublesomeproblem.(要点一)Secondly,withafairlylargevocabulary.Iamstillnotabletowriteavividandfluentcomposition.(要点二)Thirdly,andalsothemostannoyingthingisaftersomanyyearsstudying,IcouldnotcommunicatewithpeopleinEnglish.(要点三)
Therearemanyreasonsfortheseproblems.(段落主题句)Foronething,Ihavenostudyplantoenlargevocabularyandrearrangewhathavelearnedbefore.(要点一)Foranother,intheprocess,Ihavenotsummarizedacompletesetofmethodswhichwillinstructmeinthefuturestudy.(要点二)Beyondtheseobviousreasons,howeverliesadeepercause,whenIstudyEnglish,Ihavenotcreatedanenvironmenttopractiseanduseit.(要点三)
Forthereasonsgivenabove,Ifeelthatinordertoovercomethem,aboveall,Ishouldmakeastudyschedule,forexample,whenIwouldfinish
ConceptEnglish,whenIwouldgoovertheformercontentsetc.(解释一,对应上段要点一)TheschedulekeepanEnglishdiarymoreefficientandgoal-specified.(作用一)Atthesametime,IshouldkeepanEnglishdiaryandtrybesttofindopportunitiestopractiseEnglish.(解释二)ThepurposeofdiaryisnotonlytopractisethinkingandwritinginEnglish,butalsoprovideusanopportunitytosummarizestudymethodswhenyouarefree.(作用二对应要点二和要点三)onlyinthiswaycouldIcultivatethehabitofthinkinginEnglishandusingEnglish.(小结句)
写作解析:第一段:首句直接点题,提出在英语学习过程中遇到一些问题,然后简练过渡,引起下文。本段的写作也可以同第二段结合在一起,如采取这样的句型结构“IhavebeenstudyingEnglishformanyyears,andyettherearethreewhichhavealwaysbeenholdingbackmyprogress.Oneisthat………anotheristhat……thethirdisthat………”这种写法的好处是充分利用英语的现在完成进行时的语法功能,加强语气,然后列举问题,条理清晰,是考生应该思考借鉴的方法。
第二段:呼应提纲第一项要求,仍然以陈述句列举出产生困难的原因。在叙述原因时,有很多成熟和固定的句型、结构可以选择使用。
第三段:本段针对上面产生的原因逐一困难产生的原因,其内容层次有浅入深,由表面原因“学习无计划性”到“不掌握学习方法”直至“忽略了语言学习的规律:具有一个语言学习环境”。写作中,作者也是采用固定句型,整体读来,层次分明、有条不紊。
第四段:以“Forthereasonsgivenabove,Ifeelthatinordertoovercomethem。。。。”轻松过渡到阐述解决方法上来。本段写作要注意对应上文,即上面提出的原因,下面就需要给出办法。
此类文章难度不大,考生只要根据提纲,将问题、原因、解决方法陈述清楚即可。因为属于说明文范畴,大量的因定句型,词组,衔接结构可以选择使用:
解释原因、分析影响的常用句型和例句说明:
_)Therearemany(different/several/various)reasonsforthismatter(change/decrease/growth).Foronething……..Foranother………Inaddition………..Furthermore……………
例句:Thereareseveralreasonsforhisdecisionofstudyingofstudyinglaw.Foronething,heisveryinterestedinsocialaffairsanditseemsthebestwaytoenablehimtoengageintheseactivities.Foranother,hisfatherisalawyer,whohasalwaysencouragedhimtodosomethingsimilar.Inaddition,heissurethathecangetajobaftergraduation.
Anumberoffactorscontributeto(leadto/resultin/accountfor)……..andwhat’smore………
例句:Anumberoffactorscontributetochangingmoralvalues-self-indulgence,thelackofsocialconsciousnessandthedegenerationofthesocietyitself.
_)Wemayconsider(regard/thinkof/take)thechange(phenomenon/decrease/development/thesuddenlyrise)asasign(symbol/evidence/landmark)of………butthetruthisthat…….
例句:Wemaytakethechangeasasymbolofsocialdevelopment,butthetruthisthatitwillonlyleadtosocialcorruption.
_)Theexplanationforthematter(decrease/rise/change/phenomenon)of…….involvesmany(different/complicated/puzzling)factors(reasons/aspects)
例句:Theexplanationforthephenomenonoftherisingteenagesuiciderateinvolvesmanycomplicatedfactors.Someattributetherisetoanoveremphasisonearlysuccess,otherspointtomountingpeerpressure,andstillotherstoconfusionoverchangingsocialvalues.
_)Thereasonsfor……….aremany,butforthemostpartcenteron(concentrateon/focuson)……..
例句:Thereasonsforthephenomenonoftherisingteenagesuiciderateinvolvesmanycomplicatedfactors.Someattributetherisetoanoveremphasisonearlysuccess,otherspointtomountingpeerpressure,andstillotherstoconfusionoverchangingsocialvalues.
_)Thereareseveralcausesforthissignificantgrowth
in………,first……….second…………finally…………
_)Wehavereasontobelievethat………….
_)Thiscanbeexpressedasfollows:
_)Perhapstheprimaryreasonforis………..
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